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2018年8月17日 星期五

英文作文轉折詞彙整 (2)

Transition words
1.Addition: also, again, as well as, besides, furthermore, in addition, likewise, moreover, in the same way, similarly
2. Reason: since, because, for, due to, in that
3. Recommendations: recommend, should, in order to, advise, suggest
4. Restatement: in other words, that’s to say
5. Condition: once, if, provided, unless, until
6. Contrast: in contrast, conversely, instead, on one hand, on the other hand, on the contrary, rather, yet, however, nevertheless
7. Conclusion: therefore, hence, thus, so, as a result, consequently, we can conclude that, clearly, obviously, accordingly

2018年5月3日 星期四

英文作文轉折詞彙整 (1)

1. 因此: Therefore= Hence= Thus= As a result (of..)=Consequently,=Accordingly


2. 此外: Besides= In addition=Additionally= On top of that=Adding to that=Moreover, Furthermore, What’s more,


3. 然而: However =Nevertheless, Nonetheless=Yet=Still (語氣強) = That (being) said 話雖如此,卻…


4. 列舉: For example= for instance (可先寫主詞,再寫for example, 再寫動詞) / Take … (for example. /… as an example.)


5. 結果: As a result= As a consequence = Consequently  


(cf) It turns out that... 結果竟然...


(cf) It dawns on me that... 才發現...


6. 結論: In conclusion=To conclude =To sum up= All in all= In a nutshell


7. 換言之: In other words = To put it differently


(補充: 簡言之: To put it simply = Simply put)


8. 意見: As for as I’m concerned, = In my opinion/view 依我之見= From my point of view/viewpoint/perspective= To my mind


(補充: 就...而言: In terms of +N = As far as N be concerned)


9. 一般而言 In general= Generally speaking

2018年4月8日 星期日

107學年度學科能力測驗 英文作文佳作

參、英文考科作文佳作說明
以下為英文作文佳作示例,內容符合作答提示,完成寫作任務。文章組織完整,文意連貫;文法、句構、用字、拼字均佳。對考生而言,在有限的時間內,能夠以流暢的文字,寫出一篇內容豐富並符合題意要求的作文,實屬難得!
整體而言,這14篇英文作文雖然在詞彙、文法、句構與拼字的掌握上或許稍有缺失,但均屬佳作。同學平日宜藉由多元的管道,廣泛閱讀英文文章,並遵循老師的教導,勤於練習,累積寫作經驗,以便在考試時發揮實力。

二、英文作文(占20分)
說明︰
1.依提示在「答案卷」上寫一篇英文作文。
2.文長至少120個單詞(words)。
提示︰排隊雖是生活中常有的經驗,但我們也常看到民眾因一時好奇或基於嘗鮮心理而出現大排長龍(form a long line)的現象,例如景點初次開放或媒體介紹某家美食餐廳後,人們便蜂擁而至。請以此種一窩蜂式的「排隊現象」為題,寫一篇英文作文。第一段,以個人、親友的經驗或報導所聞為例,試描述這種排隊情形;第二段,說明自己對此現象的心得或感想。

原卷1:
    I am definitely a foodie. Revelling in mouth-watering treats never fails to intoxicate me with ecstasy. Thus, if there are any famous delicacy, I will more than willing to wait for a long time just to give it a try. My mother, who also puts much emphasis on eating, is my good partner, and we often explore newly opened restaurants together, which often gave us a sense of achievement when we find one. Once, we knew from TV that there was a newly opened pasta restaurant near our home. and we decided to have it as our lunch. However, what came into our views when we got the restaurant was a lone building under siege by throngs of people. My mother suggested that we came next time but I was eager to try it. As a result, we stood in line and started waiting. The time dragged and my mother became restless. Nevertheless, my heart was filled with joy and excitement. After waiting for two solid hours, it was finally our turn. We walked in the restaurant in a jubilant mood, and relish the laid-back atmosphere in the restaurant. To my disappointment, after another one hour, I walked out the restaurant in a gloomy mood. It turned out that this lunch became one of the most horrible experiment of mine. The waitress provided poor service while the pasta was too salty and unfresh.
    The experience teaches me that the amount of people waiting for a restaurant doesn’t equal how great it is. It is especially true in this social-networking era since we were often misled by a kaleidoscopic variety of new information and advertisements. It also touches me that I shouldn’t always follow the crowd. Not only when I am choosing the restaurant for lunch but also when I am making decisions. Since I am exposed to a colossal amount of knowledge, the ability to think independently becomes particularly important. The mainstream media of 21st century definitely have overwhelming advantage against the traditional ones. Thus, it becomes essential for us to learn to be a qualified modern citizen. Despite the fact that it was a terrible experience, it is also thought-provoking.  
一、本文第一段描述喜歡與母親四處造訪新開餐廳嚐鮮,然而某次排隊久候,終於進入一家電視廣為報導的餐廳用餐,結果卻大失所望。第二段則闡述從該次不愉快的經驗中學得的教訓,不應只一味聽信媒體的報導而被誤導,而應提升身為現代公民應具備的獨立思考能力。
二、內容豐富具體,文筆活潑流暢,辭藻豐富。